Wow Adam, I liked your ideas about the fight and appreciated the sentence below your video. It was hard to keep up with the scene changes in your stop motion animation. Perhaps in future keep the same background and make the action the focus. Mrs Krausse
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Wow Adam,
ReplyDeleteI liked your ideas about the fight and appreciated the sentence below your video. It was hard to keep up with the scene changes in your stop motion animation. Perhaps in future keep the same background and make the action the focus.
Mrs Krausse